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Mark Of Darkness Pag.1 Rough [Storyboard] by Dex91 Mark Of Darkness Pag.1 Rough [Storyboard] by Dex91
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Heya guys!

I finally decided to start drawing some comic pages for my Mark Of Darkness saga! :heart:

Here is the Rough for the First Page.. now of course the lines are so ugly that i can't even think of a word which suits their ugliness, and of course the drawings are very poor as well.
The Perspective is also quite flawed, especially the stairs and the side of the house in the second Panel.

But this is just a rough, my main concern here was to decide camera angles, choosing various types of shots, the layout of the page using the Panels...


If i recall correctly this is called a "Storyboard", so please let me know what you think about this judging the narrative aspect and how the page flows, which is the sole purpouse of a Storyboard!



Will probably submit the finished, well inked, refined etc page tomorrow, so stay tuned ad hope you like the fact that i began drawing the comic finally! :glomp:
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xXPUDDINGCUPXx Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2013  Student General Artist
this is pretty interesting i do like the use of gesture here
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SuperDestroyer50 Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Well quick tip, when you re-do the page, maybe thin the thumb to make it more feminine like you wanted [and making the fingers less bent and crooked] this still looks amazing though
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Maxmilian1983 Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Hai usato una carta pių scura, da l'impressione di antico.
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WolfMessenger Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013
yaaay!! ^-^
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FierceKai Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013  Student Digital Artist
UGLY?! Reallyyy??? Your storyboard is great compare to the one I done! I can call my storyboard a pure ugliness then xD Honestly this is really good so far and I don't see any mistakes there : O Your storyboard is beautiful itself and the story that tells there is clear! :D Well Done! :tighthug: :heart:
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000SkyArrow000 Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Awesome...^^
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blueriza Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013  Student General Artist
come inizio č interessante :)
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ohitsuji101 Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
this is going to be awesome!
and the lines are not that ugly if you wanna see ugly see me speed draw OH MY GOD i almost killed my self:fear: just by looking at it....anty way getting off topic awesome first page cant wait to see more:thumbsup:
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chrisbreen13 Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2013  Student General Artist
Dude, I've got a feeling this is going to be eipc :)
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aqua31798 Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
*reads description* ugly? UGLY?????:icondotdotdotzplz:....:icononisquirtplz: o, PLZ. HONEY. you might need glasses because, although its a rough draft, the drawing and artwork in this first page is AMAZING. The pencil-work is beautiful and the backgrounds/scenery is SO DETAILED OUO and lol i honestly didn't notice there was anything wrong w/ the steps until you pointed it out >.< so GREAT JOB :icongreatjobplz: as for the story itself~ as far as i can tell it flows very nicely :3 and WHOSE HAND IS THAT MUST SEE NEXT PAGE T-T
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